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 In summary, we have succeeded in the following goals:
 
 \begin{enumerate}
-       \item Design and implementation of a multithreaded process for providing continuous control over real hardware in response to intermittent user actions (Section \ref{Server Program}, \ref{Hardware})
-       \item Design and implementation of a configuration allowing this process to interface with the \emph{nginx} HTTP server (Sections \ref{Communications}, \ref{Configuration})
+       \item Design and implementation of a multithreaded process for providing continuous control over real hardware in response to intermittent user actions (Section \ref{Server Program}, \ref{Hardware Interfacing})
+       \item Design and implementation of a configuration allowing this process to interface with the \emph{nginx} HTTP server (Sections \ref{Server/Client Communication}, \ref{BeagleBone Configuration})
        \item Use of image processing both for streaming images through the API and for use as a dilatometer (Section \ref{Image Processing})
-       \item Design and implementation of a API using the HTTP protocol to allow a client process to supply user commands to the system (Section \ref{Communications})
-       \item Design and implementation of the client process using a web browser based GUI that requires no additional software to be installed on the client PC (Section \ref{Communications}, \ref{GUI})
-       \item Design and implementation of several alternative authentication mechanisms for the system which can be integrated with different user management solutions (Section \ref{Authentication})
+       \item Design and implementation of a API using the HTTP protocol to allow a client process to supply user commands to the system (Section \ref{Server/Client Communication})
+       \item Design and implementation of the client process using a web browser based GUI that requires no additional software to be installed on the client PC (Section \ref{Server/Client Communication}, \ref{Human Computer Interaction and the Graphical User Interface})
+       \item Design and implementation of several alternative authentication mechanisms for the system which can be integrated with different user management solutions (Section \ref{Authentication Mechanisms})
        \item Design and implementation of image streaming and image processing for use with a dilatometer (Section \ref{Image Processing})
        \item Partial design and implementation of a system for managing the datafiles of different users (Section \ref{API})
-       \item Partial design and implementation of a user management system in PHP based upon UserCake (Sections \ref{Authentication}, \ref{Cookies})
+       \item Partial design and implementation of a user management system in PHP based upon UserCake (Sections \ref{Authentication Mechanisms}, \ref{Cookies})
        \item Integration and partial testing of the software with the overall MCTX3420 2013 Exploding Cans project involving extensive collaboration with a class of over 30 students (All sections)
 \end{enumerate}